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Jack and Kyle - Part 4 reviews
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Posted by Jesse
excellent story dude, keep it coming!
Posted by zealot
Amazing! From the first chapter until this one, i've been deeply moved by the major characters of the story. I can't wait for the succeeding chapters you're making...I do hope this story will be a long one with a lot of the "sweet things" that Jack and Kyle are doing to each other (i.e. hugging, kissing, etc.). I believe those things are one of the most important part of a relationship and those actios give life to a gay sex story - not solely focused on sex but also of how the characters mean to each other, of how important they are to each other and of how they express the how they feel. I love the story. Seriously! I hope you release the next chapter soon!
Posted by wow500
Your stories are so fucking amazing. I have to ask-are they fueled from really life experiences?LOL. I love the characters as well as the layouts you have for the characters. So stong and individual, yet relatable. Plz continue with this line it is pure gold!!!!!
So at what point do they confess there love for one another-or are you going to make it into a tragety, sort of a romeo/juliet theme. Either way i'm such a huge fan at this point.(& don't be bumbed if people r to f'n lazy to leave a revieve for a great story;) Much LUV
Posted by jake rellin
Wow, I wasn't actually expecting such positive reviews, so thanks!
I've been quite busy lately so I haven't written part 5 yet but im making a start tonight so it shouldn't be too long til the next one is finished.
I like the characters I've created and I'm hoping to keep the story going for a while as long as people are enjoying it!
Any other comments, ideas or criticisms would be appreciated.
Thanks guys, Jake.
Posted by Kyle
Jake its a briliant story.
the first thing i did when mark caught matt with charlie is cal a mate and say how hurt i felt. Thats how gud ur writing is dude. U caught my emotions. 10 outa 10 for that.
um sugestions. Wel brian is a key part in this. Y nt twist the tale a bit to ho0k brian and charlie up. Predictable perhaps bt u culd spice it up by including sum guys frm scul. Lol let ur imagination go wild bt whatevr u do kp them cumming.
much luv
kyle ;-)
Posted by Tim
Hey jake I'm new to these stories but let me tell u these are the best I know I am ever going to read and I like how u descri e these stories and hope u continue right away these at alsome. And hopefully we will become friends to LOL. Later 929 3538 txt me if u want
Posted by briyce
omg please continue I need to read more
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