Posted by Gordon GREAT!!! Wonderful plot and development of the story!
Posted by Mitch God I am so pissed at you!! You stop at the best parts LOL! Great plot nice job. Can't wait for 8!!!!
Posted by alex Omg man you are such a tease finish the story plzzz jake man I beg of u. I love it
Posted by Shaun Omg this story is amazing yet a little painful. Ya got it all the innocent and lovable jack, the confused and painful kyle and the person u luv 2 hate the evil max. Plz dont take 2 long with chapters 8 9 and ten thanx 4 da great read lol
Posted by brandon Why the hell did you leave it off like that?! You could have easily finished.. I'm so disappointed.. Its such a good story but you're not continuing it fast enough!
Posted by Adii I have been following this from the start. Awesome story..keep it coming.
Posted by Brian Great keep it up
Posted by Joe What's going to happen next?!
Posted by Tyler as a writer, i must say that your style of writing is excellent. the characters are developed well and have real emotion. i would like to encourage you to take up writing and see where it takes you. great story that keeps your readers interested and please, hurry and finish. :] email me if you ever want to discuss your writing.