Posted by Damien I really don't know what is worse about this story. The fact that it incites rape and torture, or the fact that it involves an underage boy being raped and tortured. It is sick fucks like you that create links between the gay community and the paedophiles. If I was Brian I would have had that fucked up Jail warden sacked and disciplined and then shot the dicks off all those fucked up motherfuckers! I still cannot believe that this is meant to be an erotic story- all it is disgusting snuff that describes an innocent victim being tortured- how the fuck is this meant to be a turn on- go get HELP!!
Posted by J Yo it is fiction you are reading too much of it I agree that it is sick but it is better for folks to have a fantasy to read about than doing it for real. Let them get it out here than for real.
Posted by Paul whateva guys, its not real... so what u gettin so stressed about? I cant read thru the whole thing without cumming, Damn its some gooooood shit! Congrats on a great story!
Posted by Noordam I shot my load while I was reading the story. Let med comme again!
Posted by Andrew I think the point Damien was trying to make is that this sort of thing does happen in jail, although it is an exceptionally well-written story
Posted by none of your business The person who wrote this is really sick and needs therapy
Posted by sick and twisted this is some sick and twisted, shit, its like a car accident, u cant help it but loook, i can say this much, u have some talent writing, but this has gone beyond, erotic fantasy, first time, anything morally right, this is clear rape and you seem to find sock pleasue in this shit........................
Posted by DUDE WTF dude u have fucked up in the head, u seem to have first hand knowledge in this shit. wher u raped as a chaild, possibly 17, no no fictional or fictional person has to go though wat u have. this is beyond disgusting... even though it is fake, u support the rape ideas in twisted peoples head.. U MAKE IT SO WE HAVE TO LIVE IN FEAR OF DOING ANY SLIGHT THINGS WRONG!!!!!!!!, PUNISH THE STUPID SLUTS FOR sleeping with this underage kid, u sick sick SICK SICK SICK SICKsick SICK SICK SICK SICKsick SICK SICK SICK SICKsick SICK SICK SICK SICKsick SICK SICK SICK SICKsick SICK SICK SICK SICKsick SICK SICK SICK SICKsick SICK SICK SICK SICKsick SICK SICK SICK SICKsick SICK SICK SICK SICKsick SICK SICK SICK SICKsick SICK SICK SICK SICKsick SICK SICK SICK SICKsick SICK SICK SICK SICKsick SICK SICK SICK SICKsick SICK SICK SICK SICKsick SICK SICK SICK SICKsick SICK SICK SICK SICKsick SICK SICK SICK
PERSON!!!!!
Posted by Tom This is fucking sick!!!!!! With cameras around that officer would be in jail. Students taking pics. They be in jail too,,,This is all fucking unbelievable stupid unthought out crap. The weirder is twisted and needs a shrink
Posted by deharvestevans I WANT TO FUCK A BOY DICK SO BAD
Posted by Nick Loved the story.I would like the tables turned and Steve get dicked.He sort of deserves it and a bit of forced cumming from him being fucked.
Posted by Nickf Nice story.Did he "nut"?