Posted by jamahl very good story cant wait for next one
Posted by TERRY MURPHY very good start, you are introducing the characters very well, just need a few descriptions as to what thye look like, ie facial features, etc.
Posted by Jacen Solo Yes agree with terry I do. Good development but what do they look like? And don't jump right for the sex. Love man, that's what makes stories special.
Posted by L this is good but like Jamahl said, you need some descriptions of the men here. but other than lack of description, this is very good and although short i can tell it's gonna be a good story :D keep it up :D
I have always liked the look of girl’s panties when I was growing up, the feel, the way they looked. Often I would walk by the lingerie section of my local department store, just so I could see all the panties hanging on the rack...