Posted by jamahl very good story cant wait for next one
Posted by TERRY MURPHY very good start, you are introducing the characters very well, just need a few descriptions as to what thye look like, ie facial features, etc.
Posted by Jacen Solo Yes agree with terry I do. Good development but what do they look like? And don't jump right for the sex. Love man, that's what makes stories special.
In the final chapter, shrouded with mystery and slow revelations, lots are going on. Ethan White goes missing and later GETS KILLED. Adam White shows up at the apartment with a some flowers to find his date with Woody Anderson. And everyone ends up in Hell! So what's up with the title of the chapter?
There is nothing that I love better than giving head. I'd rather do that
than anything ... better than fucking ... better than being fucked ...
etc. I think you get what I mean...
