Posted by Tom DAMN! Dude, this story has GOT to be fictional...It just has to be, because this shit would make even the most sadistic person cringe in his chair... I kinda figured something was similar because I read Shock and really cringed..... I guess if it gets ya off....But man, this is kinda murder, ya know? This isn't sexy, it doesn't get me off at all. Seriously, your stuff needs to be less serious....I'm shocked and I usually like the rougher stories on here. This is basically a murder/torture story...
Posted by Gary YOu are one sick fucking bastard. This is not writing this sounds like the story of a fucking maniac. YOu need to see a shrink if you think that mutalation is a turnon. Even make believe (if it is) to ruin a youngman like that is well...just to shocked to even think. I can't believe that this website would post violent stories like this.
Posted by yearight this would fit in a murder story. My point of view is that this story is something that make this site find the IP and check the 1 that wrote to see if hes sick or something worse this is a story that every man should and never ever think of that man who made must have a creepy mind to mudrer if this is not fictional and i knew the 1 that made it get killed.
but i dont and it is fictional so i just go on with my life nothing has happened
Posted by Chris This story is amazing serously!!!!!!!!! how did you come up with it?. You have one amazing mind!!
Posted by Tiger This is sick!
You sadistic bastard!
Sex, even if rough and painful, should give pleasure to the both party!
This one isn't sex fetish but pure torture!
Posted by Ann I have to admit that is ter extreme but i dont think you trying to make it seem sexy as they said. i have wrote some pretty bad stuff but not to this extreme. but i would like to know what happens next please. i hope he makes it.
Posted by max wow awesome i didnt even know some of that stuff could be done
Posted by Unsung Vigilante Not funny dude u are a sick twisted prick and I hope if u get off on this shit that one day u are put in the boys shoes I had torture happen to me and now because of it I will never be able to cum a guy actually kidnapped me and crushed my balls with a base ball bat. So in all trems u sick twisted piece of rotting cum guzzling gutter trash fat bastard blemish on society I hope your in that boys shoes one day. The only reason u writw these is either your a sick and wanna kill some innocent beautiful boy that shot you down because your ugly as sin. Or your just some sick twisted freak like john wayne gacy, or jeffery domer and you need put away befor you try and act one of these out if you haven't already. Go get some help.
Posted by Bob Joe @ Unsung Vigilante Dude relax. It's just a torture story.
Posted by Lawrence Is this real or fake and can u do this me every thing except the rat