Posted by Gene Paul I thourghly enjoyed the story and found it very exciting.I liked the characters and felt the frustration in the main character as he had to wait and only watch for so long.It made me feel warm all over and my heart raced from time to time.I wish I could have stepped into Jim's shoes a couple of times.
Posted by D-VO This wasn't a well written piece at all, but it has potential to be sexy. I think you, the writer, need to think about the reader who is invaribaly reading this in order to jack off. A reader finds several things annoying when trying to jack off such as spelling errors and inproper use of the English language. When reading this, I almost lost my boner whenever you said the word "Smile." Obviously, the concept you wer trying to convey with this was that you, the story teller, are smiling. You need to just say that you smiled in the story, don't use internet language. It is the most annoying thing I have ever read in my life. Please, change it for god's sake.
Posted by Davis this was a great story. it made me hard. thanks
Posted by Cracksub I am a HUGE webster fan and have read a lot of his stories. This by FAR is the HOTTEST one so far!
Posted by albsexy Great storey heaven was worth waiting for well told very horney don't think I could have waited so long ha ha ha Thanks xx
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I licked around the head and teased him for a bit then I started to lick up and down his shaft where he gladly just stiffened and begged for more in a grunting way and then I stuffed his dick into my mouth and deep throated him continuously and man did I love that feeling down my throat and I had never taken so much like this before...