Posted by JM it was wa good story. but you should add more drama.
Posted by kaell yer i agree
Posted by Colin Wow, no sex but still so hot. The tension between them both was so well written. I'm looking forward to reading part two, great work mate.
Mr. Sandman, bring me a dream
Make him the cutest that I’ve ever seen
Give him two lips like roses and clover
Then tell him that his lonesome nights are over...