Posted by JOE ONN COME ON GIVE MY SOMETHING TO WORK WITH THE STORY HAD NOTING I LIKE IT BUT NOTING HAPPPEND IF THERE IS ANOTHER ONE MAKE IT BETTER!!!!!
Posted by John Avon You mean it had no sex? So, for a story to be enjoyable it has to have sex in it? I'm setting the scene. Just be patient and if the worst comes to the worst get a boyfriend. You can (probably) have lots of sex then.
Posted by Dan err... where's the second part? I think the story was very good but it sort of leaves a blank...
Posted by Jake I really enjoyed the story and think you did an excellent job. I did think it kind of dropped off, you need a dénouement. I'm really looking forward to the second installment, when can I expect it?
Posted by crystalstar personally i loved it so far. still waiting for the next part though so hurry up with it. i thought it was great writing and there doesn't have to be sex from the word go.
Posted by mark can't wait for the second part
Posted by Rigoberto I loved the first part of this story. It sort of reminds me of what happend to me ten years ago in High school.I can't wait for the second part.
Posted by Robin What no 2nd part of the story. I've been waiting for the 2nd part of the story for a long time. I'm so can't wait no longer, god.What trhe hell.
Posted by Jacob The story you wrote really made me full of emotions.
I think that these story's are very good, You have done a really good job :)
Plz continue with a next part plz ;P
I'd love to read more of this story's.
Posted by jacob up yours
Posted by njh make another 1
Posted by Paulette looking forward to second part dont make us wait for it long
Posted by Asoj Great Story when is the second part expected to be finished? Great story...
Posted by MR.D WHERE IS JOSHUA PART 2
Posted by blah awww =) i want the second part
Posted by Michael Excellent! You need to keep writing! and send them to me (Oopsi91@yahoo.com) this is great!
Posted by John Excellent. please write more!!
Posted by Josh Loved the first part! Im dying to read part 2!! where is it??
Posted by Rickey Lawson this went no where...
Posted by Gabriel I want more MORE. You have to write the second piece. I have to know what happens!
Posted by Momo OMFG. I love you...`re skills on writing and creating emotions. Definately had me going!
Posted by john hurry up and make a new one!!!!!!!
Posted by Anonymous Very nice story! In the daydream, I thought it was real and was like crying! But then I got happy. Hurry and wright the next one!
Posted by ella oh! I liked this! update soon!
Posted by jason uhh, does anyoneone know if this guys still alive?!
Posted by jason oops, haha i mean anyone...lol. love this story too, asked cuz didnt know whether or not u were due to no sequel....
Posted by josh this story was awsome! i am hooked, what happens next?
Posted by Supa Man this story is awesum ! it isnt just another sex story ... its full of real life coming out stuff ! gives me lots of emotions cozits the kinda thing tht im facing .... :D
Posted by derek I love it. now plz dont be one of those authors who takes their mary funk'n time writting a sequel. u'v got some real skill 2 pages and i already want more plz hurry w/ the next one.
Posted by niccy123 good one...excellent
Posted by josh miller this story is great i cant wait for the next one!!
Posted by steve HURRY THE FUCK UP WITH THE SEQUEL!
Posted by Andy mmmm this is the best story ever and where's the 2nd part?
Posted by vatson the story was really nice maybe i should try that smtime with my best frnd
Posted by willy ok EXCELNT so far hope you keep writeing
