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Joshua (part 1) reviews

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Posted by JOE

ONN COME ON GIVE MY SOMETHING TO WORK WITH THE STORY HAD NOTING I LIKE IT BUT NOTING HAPPPEND IF THERE IS ANOTHER ONE MAKE IT BETTER!!!!!

Posted by Dan

err... where's the second part? I think the story was very good but it sort of leaves a blank...

Posted by crystalstar

personally i loved it so far. still waiting for the next part though so hurry up with it. i thought it was great writing and there doesn't have to be sex from the word go.

Posted by mark

can't wait for the second part

Posted by Rigoberto

I loved the first part of this story. It sort of reminds me of what happend to me ten years ago in High school.I can't wait for the second part.

Posted by Robin

What no 2nd part of the story. I've been waiting for the 2nd part of the story for a long time. I'm so can't wait no longer, god.What trhe hell.

Posted by jacob

up yours

Posted by njh

make another 1

Posted by Paulette

looking forward to second part dont make us wait for it long

Posted by John

Excellent. please write more!!

Posted by Josh

Loved the first part! Im dying to read part 2!! where is it??

Posted by Gabriel

I want more MORE. You have to write the second piece. I have to know what happens!

Posted by Momo

OMFG. I love you...`re skills on writing and creating emotions. Definately had me going!

Posted by john

hurry up and make a new one!!!!!!!

Posted by Anonymous

Very nice story! In the daydream, I thought it was real and was like crying! But then I got happy. Hurry and wright the next one!

Posted by ella

oh! I liked this! update soon!

Posted by jason

uhh, does anyoneone know if this guys still alive?!

Posted by jason

oops, haha i mean anyone...lol. love this story too, asked cuz didnt know whether or not u were due to no sequel....

Posted by josh

this story was awsome! i am hooked, what happens next?

Posted by Supa

Man this story is awesum ! it isnt just another sex story ... its full of real life coming out stuff ! gives me lots of emotions cozits the kinda thing tht im facing .... :D

Posted by steve

HURRY THE FUCK UP WITH THE SEQUEL!

Posted by Andy

mmmm this is the best story ever and where's the 2nd part?

Posted by vatson

the story was really nice maybe i should try that smtime with my best frnd

Posted by willy

ok EXCELNT so far hope you keep writeing

Posted by No

I dont wanna repeat everybody elses comments... But a part 2 would be great if it could be here soon

Posted by cookies

that was a good story

Posted by dangtowel

This story is excellent..I hope you write more

Posted by LOne

update please

Posted by Tekkin

What is taking so long????

Posted by johan

when i s chapter 2 cumming??

Posted by david

this story has no fucking in it.. i wanted to see fucking, but otherwise, it was good.

Posted by Zach

Oh m g, so cute!! You have to continue!!

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