Posted by Michael Smith hey guys it's me hope you like this
Posted by jesse Hey, Im sorry but I didn't really like this one. It was poorly written, some spelling mistakes, and you didn't use " when they were talking. I hope you make another story, but better written next time -Jesse
Posted by Ima latino I'm afraid I'm gonna have to agree with that little cocksucker on this one ur story is ass smelly bad. Sorry dude
Posted by faggot of the damned please dont write a chapter 2 this story was very bad
Posted by daro I Like latinos ,Ima Latino, we should hook up some time.. oh yeah Michael a little advice give up writing