Posted by Trigger Nicely written story. There had better be more and you'd better keep Lou in the mix too. Like your simplicity and views about gay life.
Posted by J. Rivers I'm into it, i just wish each part would be longer, its great that u leave me wanting more. As fellow writer I c the potential each character has, especially Daniel, Lou and Zach. This story has the possibility of becoming great if u kept it going.