Posted by Ken This is really a good story. It does deserve two thumbs up. I would like to see this story continue but I guess it's complete unless there are more surprises. Thanks
Posted by Eric I was wraped up and inspired by this story! I hope that this is not fiction! If it is, i do not want to know! If feels so real and alive! I want to know what else happens I am dying to know!
Posted by Jay pretty damn good
Posted by Mark you should definitely continue, great story!
Posted by Perry I'm not sure what to say other then, Thank You! I love erotic porn, who doesn't? But your story was so moving. Please continue this one.
Posted by GT well put together - i had those same feelings for a special guy which came to nothing. Keep up the good work,
Posted by dwc well written...geez seymour, you're so freakin good at this. i believe you should continue this great story.
Posted by CHC Wow, I'm really impressed with this story. It's absolutely well thought-out and meaningful! Can't wait to read the next installment! Yes, you should definitely continue and keep up the exemplary work! Awesome job.
Posted by deitrich i was so in love with a friend from 7th garde until the day he got married (13 years later) i never told him but I know that he knew.
Posted by jon jr. Seymour, Bravo! I always look forward to your storys and am never disappointed. I have then all saved on my PC. More then half of them hit very close to home and my trials and tribulation. Your stores have caused more then just a few tears to fall.
Posted by robby this was a really good story. it made me cry and it takes alot to do that.
Posted by Monty * sitting in front of my PC speechless* This is one of the best, if not the best stories that I've ever read. It is so well written that I could picture everything in my mind, James, Jared, Alex, his car, their school, even Alex's front yard. I laughed, cried, and everything in between. I printed a copy and sat next to a friend on my balcony while he read it. He looked up a few times but said nothing. I watched tears start to roll down his cheeks. I was glad he cried because I felt silly doing it myself because no written text has ever made me cry, until now. I want to read more from you in you're unusual style of writing.
Posted by B-rice Liked the Story. Good good.
Posted by chico Wow! Wow!....Sorry, that all I can come up right now is Wow!
Posted by D great story you really should keep writing
Posted by Jerry I read your story "My Three Amigos" and thought is was great so I started readng your others that you've written and found this one even more touching. I also noticed that at one time your stories dominated the "coming out" catagory but you haven't submitted a story in quite a while. Why? What I like most about most of your stories is that they're not just "sex stories" but stories about love, friendship, life, happiness, sadness, and so descriptive that I can picture the people and as I scroll through the paragraphs. I've emailed you and have not gotten any response. Where are you Seymour Cox? - Please write more. J
Posted by [S]ciei Wow, what a great story! I'm glad it all turned out good. Is this a true story? If so, I'm glad of the happy ending. If not, thanks for it! Although, it could have been finished a little more erotically. All in all, I have to say four stars. I minus half a star for the spelling mistakes and the missing word or two and another half for the quick finish. Excellent though! I was rooting for Jared after I found out that he wasn't a manipulative user like the hints were leading to. I never liked James because he didn't reciprocate for Alex. But oh well. KUDOS!!!! Sincerely, Sorcerer [S]Ciei
Posted by Danno1754 I think that all of the reviews above have covered everything that I would want to add. This story and many of you others are amazing because how suddenly they become either very funny or very sad. I don't mean funny (ha ha) and sad (boo hoo) I mean like I am either laughing my ass off or crying like a baby. I don't know if I should compliment you or pity you Seymour because you are either a very talented writer or an extremely tortured sole. Thank's for making me laugh and cry Danno1754
Posted by david holy jesus son of mary and joseph! that was some story buddy. the opening paragraph sucked me in until the very last word. is this a true story?
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Posted by Harry Edwards This was the best story I ever read, it wasnt all about sex and it kept me gripped. U should write and Publish your own books and if u do and already have some out let me know.
Posted by mly Excellent, my friend. Excellent.........
Posted by Thomas Boring to be honest.. Got to the middle of page one and had to stop reading!!!!
Posted by Connor Absolutely bloody fantastic!!!!!! I couldn't keep my eyes off the screen, it was like reading somebody's life story who I wanted to be so much.. Hehe, keep up the brilliant work!!!! :D
Posted by Rayme Hagen What an awesome story!! I too was glued to the screen all the time.
Posted by Matthew That was such a great story I LOVED it!!!
Posted by Matthew That was such a great story I LOVED it!!!
Posted by Tim Very Great Story! I'm sad that I can't continue reading.
Posted by albsexy That was HOT and also very DEEP mmmmm well told thanks can't wait for the next part
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