Posted by Ruben Miggy, I have to say that this was a good story to begin with, plz write part 2, I'd love to know how the date is going to be.
Posted by Miggy @Ruben - OMFG? It's good? OMG! I'm so scared on the outcome of this story! Hope Kieran reads it and other people as well. :) I'm kinda working on Part 2, Ruben. :)
Posted by Kieran Lee Hi! Miggy I must say you started off this story with a lot of description and a captive begining, so that was good. The switch of scenes confused me slightly, but that's probally just me haha. Seriously continue this, it would be great to watch it grow, you obviously have a lot of creative ideas in your head. I'm rambling on lol, it's a great start it really is! :)
Posted by Miggy @Kieran - Yeah about the scene changes I was kinda nervous on writing it long.. I guess It's like the summarized version of what I'm thinking.. I'm definitely working on Part 2.. Thanks a lot, Kieran for spending your time to read my first story! :)
Posted by Zac Great job Miggy :D, this story is great! Trevor and Shannon are such a cute couple! I can't wait 4 part 2!
Posted by Miggy @Zac - Thank you thank you!! I'm working on Part 2. :) It's just taking me days to really think it out since I'm still new to the world of writing and grammars and stuffs! LOL! :D Thank you thank you again! :)
Posted by Seth Well miggy you realy talk alot but in agood way.... You are amazing but there is something missing like where's the girlfriend of trevor and how the boys meet again its just odd alittle bit......anyway it is agood start keep writing and i will be with you all the way...
Posted by Miggy @Seth - Hey! :) Thanks for the comment! And thanks for reading.. I'm working on part 2 and definitely making it more refined.. Plus, Kai and Eddie from When I'm With You made a cameo in part 2.. Well, not really a cameo but, they we're mentioned.. Watch out for Part 2. Thanks! :)
Posted by Miggy Hello Guys! :) I've submitted Part 2.. It's getting reviewed.. Can't wait! :) Hope you guys like it! :)
Posted by Seth Where is it part 2 Miggy i have not seen it anywhere
Posted by Miggy @Seth - Oh, hi Seth! It's under review.. :) Hopefully it would be up soon for public view! :)
Posted by seth ok that fantastic I cant wait
Posted by Miggy @Seth - Thanks Miggy! :) Knowing you (and other people) who reads my story means a lot! I mean, I'm not even a writer! But, definitely a big thanks, big hug and big kiss for reading! :)
Posted by Miggy Hello again guys! Part 2 is up on my page.. I don't know why they won't show up on the home page. Hope you like it all! :)