Posted by Romeo I like to know what happens next but you need to improve on your writing. Give more sexual descriptions. You could have also told more about the party.
Go into more details and make the chapters longer. Going into more details especially with the sex will make your chapters longer. Your chapters are finish before the readers can get interested in it.
Good story, just needs more details on events sexually and/or others.
Posted by justin kaiden, i'm 16 but i wanna fuck u so bad right now that my dick hurts
Posted by twista me too justin. it could be a 3some
Posted by albsexy No need to say sorry it was still good keep them cumming ha ha ha