Posted by kaell i really enjoyed that cant wait to see this story unfold
Posted by web cam i will be posting the next part soon, glad you liked it!
Posted by Brendon I found this so random, it was no introduction to whatever lies ahead, it didnt introduce any theme or conflict and or much character information...I sure hope the next one picks up!
Posted by rhaf wow an0ther story who wants to get a higher rate. . . . Please do c0ntinue, i'm excite for this an0ther story after i read the 'Help!'. . . . . Keep going web cam! You can do it,
Posted by Gannon Iv read lots of ur stories & notisted that sure do like brown eyes I mean 1 character in every 1 of ir stories has them :). Love u lotz!!!!!!!!!! xxxxxx
Posted by Web Cam Haha, I do like brown eyes. I think that you can tell alot about somebody by looking into their eyes. When I first meet somebody, the first thing I look at is always their eyes, as I'm sure most people do. They are the most attractive part of a man's body in my opinion. I think the eyes are the most expressive part of a person and my favourite eye colour is definately brown. Well noticed Gannon ;).
Posted by albsexy That was interesting hopefully the next part will be great can't wait to read it