Posted by kaell i really enjoyed that cant wait to see this story unfold
Posted by web cam i will be posting the next part soon, glad you liked it!
Posted by Brendon I found this so random, it was no introduction to whatever lies ahead, it didnt introduce any theme or conflict and or much character information...I sure hope the next one picks up!
Main character is love smitten with friend. An embarrasing incident is catalist for setting things in motion. Emphasis not so much on story line but on sexual encounter (first experience)...