Posted by Romeo You just started this series and already i'ts confusing.
How did Jack and David reveal their feelings? Is Jack insecure about everything? How do Joe fit into their friendship? He just appear from no where.
We could use a little background on everything, especially on how Jack and David got together.
Continue the series, just make it more clearer.
Posted by Web Cam All will become clear in time my friend :)
Posted by Josh I do like the story line but I agree with Romeo. The whole background situation kind of makes everything a little confusing. Other than that, I really like the story. I am looking forward to part 4.
Posted by jac jones grrrr i want the next one now so i can figure this out
Posted by web cam to be honest i dont know if i can be bothered to carry on with lovers at last. I have been busy working on my "Help!" series which in my opinion is better, and i also have plans for a new series which should also be better and less complicated than this one. We will see, i may carry on if i can find the time and motivation :(. Try reading my other stories if you are hungry for more :) I promise you they are better!
Posted by web cam I have decided to continue with it following comments from readers of my "Help!" series asking me to continue :). Bare with me though cos i have forgotten what was going to happen in this story in my head so i have to make it all up again! :D
Posted by Joey CarMichael i'm so on edge.... where's part four..
Posted by rhaf aaahh, web cam i was really excited to it's part 4, although it's c0nfucing but s0mehow i can get it point. What made me c0nfuse is that, how the three of them became friend.? And i thought it was only 24 hr when they had met, but suddenly it was a year?
Well, i kn0w you can find way to solve it and make it clearly. You can find ways to make it. Go0d luck, plz do c0ntinue. . . Thanks again.
Posted by orion quite good story, althought this last part was a bit confusing
Posted by orion quite good story, althought this last part was a bit confusing
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