Posted by mark Great ending to a good story. The best part yet
Posted by kd this is the best part of the story loved it
Posted by kofhe love the story it was amazing
Posted by kristal i loved the story
Posted by Ken Awesome...best story ever!
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Posted by kamaki wonderful story, thanks
Posted by Holden Great story & interesting main characters. I kept wanting to know what would happen next!
Posted by willy i absoloutly love these story's. your a amazing writer and i think you have a gift :) . only one thing confused me THE PARENTS they wuz theyre one day but gone in like 3 seconds whered they go?
Posted by jam2697 this is without a doubt the best story i've ever read-i totally fell in love with both jay and Mark and really felt for them. I can't wait to read your other stories :)
Posted by Romeo I love this series!
I hope there will be future series about Jay and Mark. What happened to James, Pete, Danny, and the guys family. We don't know anything about the other characters. Write more about these guys future life.
Awsome series!
Posted by Cherrie Awesome story! I found both Jason and Mark realistic, great job!`
Posted by web cam someone should turn this into a movie! It would be awesome! :)