Posted by Joe Overall, it was a good story. You really need to work on grammar though. Also what would really improve your stories is some good adverbs.
Posted by Col Hey dude that was a hot story, I look forward to reading more from you even if you don't use 'some good adverbs' lol
Keep the hot stories cummin so we can keep cummin lol
He wasn’t wearing boxers or boxer briefs like I expected; he had on panties! This kid was wearing a pair of pink satin and lace thong panties. I couldn’t believe my eyes...