Posted by Mike As brilliant as ever ... can't wait to read the next chapter!!
I have to ask though, - is this a true story?? It certainly reads like it is!!
Posted by brendon hey man,i've been waiting for this for ages! cant wait for the next story,hope its as awesome as all the rest, thanx alot m8! keep up the good work...in this case writing,ciao
Posted by Mike Please let's have the next chapter. It's nearly four months since you posted this chapter and I'm getting frustrated waiting ........
Posted by John please tell me when the next part comes out keep them coming love it so far
Posted by bill Good story line. Read all of them tonight... you left this one with quite a cliff hanger.... hopefully you are still working on them...
At an exclusive, private, and nearly all white, college, some players cheat their way to victory in a goodwill game with an African American team, whose players are mainly from the ghetto of the inner city. Later, however, the black players get their revenge-and have fun doing it...
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