Posted by alex-sp That's quite an interesting story. I wondered why you hadn't submitted any story after part 5.
Posted by bill You saved 'em... good job.
Posted by Tony Grr! Such a long wait for such a short selection. Super swell story, keep it up.
Posted by IVAN BEST IVE HEARD KEEP THE STORIES COMING.NICE SAVE!!!
Posted by Em Grrr that rough part was so hot. Man you have a knack for writing. I cant wait for the next part. Dont rush it though. Good things take time but I still cant wait. Fucking amazing and hot.
Posted by raja its just awesome but wheres d end?
Posted by kris wow that was amazing can't wait to read more
Posted by sam finish the goddamn story
Posted by J. Rodriguez Lets see... this story was writen back in february... and its now OCTOBER! I guess it's understandible, why this story is taking a while to complete, seeing as how its true and all. However I can't help but feel a little aprehensive about reading what comes next. I can't help but have this overhelming feeling that it's going to be quite painfull.
Chapter 5 reveiled that Chris had forced himself on Joe, wich might be why Joe has become so distent. And this chapter reveald that Chris was attacked by his step father back when he was eleven, I'm sure you all know what I'm thinking, but I hope it's not that. Also there was mention that Derick, back when he was introduced, will cause further mayhem the coming events. Now wether that has already come to pass during the field trip or has not as of yet will remain to be seen.
It's all speculation at this point but thats all we can do untill we receive the next part. Well Will I hope you havent fallin off the face of the earth (like some the other athers on this site) but I will still continue to lookout for your story. I find one of the best ones on this site.
Posted by Curtis Cant wait!
Part 7!
Posted by Rebecca OMG! I am a straight female and your story is absolutely incredible! Please finish soon! I can't wait to read the rest! You should think about writing seriously and publishing your work!
