Posted by madmna okay there is something wrong here........... HOW ABOUT U LEARN HOW TO TYPE or slow down or something. I didnt hardly read the first paragraph and there were many mistakes that just makes me not want to read it.
Posted by Pat I guess I found your other story:) Great story, although there is some errors, it was still very good. As far as madmna (I assume he meant madman) goes, maybe he would have enjoyed it more if he hadn't just jerked off to the last story he read. Take care, Pat:)