Posted by bistudent give me a shout. i have about 5 more episodes in mind if there is any interest. david
Posted by teenmike18 good story for bi guys...could be little more descript tho (what they're seeing).
Posted by david teenmike18
thanks for the constructive crit. check your email i sent a note.
should i keep this story and the illustrations going?
let it die a peaceful death? david
Posted by d_201 Love the story. Keep more cuming. Your illustrations are HOT. Personally, I am eagerly looking forward to the next installment. Really enjoyed the way you got the story moving. Do agree with Mike above somewhat---more sexy descriptions would enhance the story---just don't get sidetracked with them so much that you lose the train of thought. Loved the illustrations--add more--at least oneillustration per part of the story would be great.
Posted by Alexander I loved the story. I think that the description was perfect, the pictures were awesome. Change nothing, but make lots ^^
Posted by larry I really loved that story, and it made me harder
than i've been in a long time. really wannna suck
a dick more now then ever. smooth guy
larrya@tampabay.rr.com
Posted by larry I Love watching men sucking cock !!!
Posted by larry I'll suck a cock if anyone needs some help
!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Posted by ariel i like big cocks especially with many pubic hair and sweet semen
Posted by graham great second instalment, drawings were more detailed and looked so cool and real, them cocks looked so suckable, and the whole story was like real life,im hoping that there wil be more instalments, as i have enjoyed reading them, and got real horn too, ha ha ha. keep up the good work, Please
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