Posted by Michael Booker I was actually kind of disappointed. The first half was decent, and for me the last part just kind of spiraled out of control. Abusive language can be sexy sometimes, but after a while it becomes redundant and unnecessary. Good try though.
Posted by Max hi ur story is hot like hell. i already cumed. hope that u will send the next part soon. waiting for next part.
Posted by funguy dude i loved your story. i didnt make it all the way through before i had to cum. i wish i was tyler.
Posted by Nate Phillips I agree with Michael here... It started pretty decently beyond some common grammatical errors, but in the end it was just too repetitve and overdone. Good luck with your next couple of stories...
Posted by Malik Question? What is the deal with people getting off on other people being raped, degraded and humiliated? There is just nothing sexy or erotic about it, and to me it is just as pathetic when the rape victim lays down, puts up with it and acts as though everything is hunky dorey! This story is definately a two thumbs down for me!
Part 20, chapter 1 -It's Pearl Harbour, and war with America. All contacts with the United-States are cut off by the Germans. But right before Christmas, through the Swiss Embassy, Paul receives a coded messages from his mother...
