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Posted by Mike
Having just read all four parts of this story I can say that it was generally a well written and pretty hot story.
However to be a truly great story the continuity problems need to be rectified. So many things are said in one part of the story and then contradicted (as though they were never said) in another part.
This guy has the potential to be a great writer but he needs to be far more careful.
Posted by don
I think that the major bad thing from this story is the whole dialogue of the characters. When one person says something, another line should be used below for the next person to speak. It reads more clearly that way. I find it far less confusing.
Posted by willy
im crying like a baby right now i knew he would die but didnt want it to happen PLEASE tell me he finds someone els if so please contact me
Posted by Tim
This story was the best story I have and will ever read but I cried at the ending. And wish this never happened to nick but I will say this story changed me. Thank you.
Posted by Tyson
oh i never thought i would cry but.. well i did
what a beautiful story
Posted by Simon Waters
A truly remarkable story! I have tears in my eyes. The formatting of the story may not be the best as some have put it, but the most important part of the story is very well done; the emotions!
This story appealed to on such a profound level, to gain something and then to lose it, or lose something else. The truth of life, that not all endings are happy ones. Congratulations of such a deeply moving piece of literature, I look forward to reading more.
Posted by Romeo
I love this series! It's the first I read that proves its not always a happy ending. That what makes the series more real and emotional than other stories. My heart just broke for these two guys!
What's going to happen to Nick now? How is he going to get over the lost of his first love in such a dramatic way?
It's a beautiful series but I think you could end it with a nore beautiful final chapter by making a tribute to the falling love.
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