Posted by bill You've done it again! Great story... But you've got to ease up on these cliff hangers.... you know we can't just turn the page, we have to wait!!! :-)
Posted by SevenbySix Another great chapter. I just love the way that you take the time to include all of the details in the story - kind of makes me feel as though I am there with you and sharing the same experiences. Can't wait for the next chapter!
Posted by Mike Jack, I can't thank you enough for continuing with this story. Mike sounds delightful. I'm so looking forward to the next part.
Thank you again.
Posted by alex-sp Mmm, interesting. I hope it ends well in next part.
Posted by Jac Jack, It's another wonderful chapter. I got one question? Is there another Mike in Martinique, for me or does he got any friend:)? You're really great Jack, honestly, I fell in love with the whole story and I want to dream about every chapter when I go to bed. I'm suppose to start on my school assignment but I set it aside, I prefer to read your story. SevenbySix (i dont know what's that name suppose to mean :)) is right. Reading your story makes one feel as though he is in the scene. Got to go to bed now, it's 1 am in sydney.
Great job and thanks a lot Jac
Posted by Jake Jack, I have read stories from this site for about a year and I have never written a comment about one. I just had to write you a comment because in a matter of days i read your whole 27 chapters and they are fantastic and well written. Loved every part of it and probably one of the best stories I have read, Just wanted to thank you for keeping on going with it!! Can't wait till next chapter!! THANKS again for writing!!