Posted by Andy woah i already love that story :D i hope there are more chapters to come.. i like kyle a little word of advice though.. you should add names to dialogs coz sometimes it's kinda confusing who's speaking apart from that YOU'RE THE BEST & i'm already stalking your profile waiting for the next part lol
Posted by RYAN I WANT TO READ MORE. PLZ RIGHT MORE
Posted by louie estacio oooohhhhhhh i want to read more it's all dramatic haha i love it :))
Posted by albsexy WOW that was a very sad story you had me in tears (soft git aren't I)got loads of potential for a very sexy story can't wait for the next part