Posted by me great story. i'm waiting for the next chapter.
Posted by Mark Great Story I really enjoyed it keep up the good work mand. I hope to hear more about it and what happens when he tells his parents and sister as well what happens after Graduation hopefully your mind will work overtime and you can create another amazing chapter to add to this one. Again I say this story was awesome Keep up the GREAT Job!!!
Posted by matt This was such a great story. I have one suggestion though. I would like to see Scott fuck Gred up the ass. That'd be hot.
Posted by Mike A few criticsms - the dialogue is often contrived and unrealistic - the adjective "manly" is well over-used - however the story on the whole is hot and sensual and I can't wait to see what happens next!!
Posted by Nicky Hi.I am glad for you that you found each other.You sound really happy toghether,to me.Take care
Posted by Jeff Mike , please let me know where you think the dialouge is cintrived and unrealistic. I'm not saying I agree with you, but I do want to review it before i write another chapter. Thanks, Jeff
Posted by David Green Jeff this just keeps getting better and better. Keep up the great work and I can't wait until the next chapter 'cause I'm dying to find out just how his life changes!
David G.
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