Posted by Brandon okay.. nice story but u want some advice?
i think you should short the not so important parts.. like the concert ?
Posted by Leo EVERYTHING WAS GREAT ABOUT YOUR STORY. DONT CHANGE ANYTHING ABOUT IT. JUST WRITE WHAT LIKE YOU WANT IT.
Posted by mahesh super pls sent some stories
Posted by anthony Hello,
I truly id enjoy this story. I would like to know what happened to them next...
Posted by tough i wish i was there to testify u baby ur stiry made me cum
Posted by don its great just proofread for grammer errors and you will be great
Posted by BLAKE I. REALLY LIKED YOUR STORY IT KEPT ME HARD!!! PLEASE WRITE MORE. CONTACT ME.
As his Father Williams' body jerked up and down, I loved the thought of knowing that he was injecting me with his fertile Roman Catholic sacrament as his warm cum exited his body and entered mine...