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Posted by Athan
I really have to be careful about what I say to people who write about their first time, because these stories aren't like the others. Reading this story, I wasn't turned on in the slightest. It left everything to the imagination, which for some people if fine, but I am not one of them. You go right to what they're doing, they layed down, he sucked him, he ate him out, the end. Think back to the details of this experience, speak from your heart. Take some time, explain the sensations and feelings he's giving you; contimplate about the feelings you're giving him. Don't be afraid to go into a little more detail about exactly what happened. Stories don't have to be 1 page long. I'm sorry to turn this into a bunch of bad points from your story, but I'm just trying to help you out. The storyline is great, though! :D
Posted by Mike
What a total load of crap!!!
This is a piece of self-indulgent rubbish - it lacks finesse - it lacks story telling techniques.
Some serious advice for you - don't bother again!!
Posted by Chuck Bell
Hey Athan, thank YOU for the informative help. Considering this was a REAL experience I just wrote what happened, thanks for helping me out with some stuff. I might do an edit and dive deeper into what was happening. Thank YOU again.
And Mike, there is no reason to be a douch bag. What have you written?
Posted by jerry
Check out the writings of William Skez or Seymour Cox in the "coming out" catagory. These guys are awesone writers. Williams are hot and sentimental. Seymours are hot but sometimes so touching that I swear I want to cry.
Posted by Rich
Chuck; You may not be the best writer, but you did write. I liked the story and I think it is true. I also like your answer to Mike.
Posted by Lawliet
personall i think this is a very good story, you told what happened in your words and that allowed me to leave the rest up to my imagination. pay no attention to the losers who say this is rubbish, it made me one happy person. if people say that this is shit and stuff well it's not and it;s very well written.
keep up all the good writing
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