Posted by Mike Holy Hell. OK like I said in Part 1, I never write reviews. Usually I have seen past writers that write a great Part 1 of their story and then totally BLOW IT TO HELL on Part 2. Jeff, this story is FRIGGIN AWESOME. Your detail is terrific. This one is going to be read over and over for sure!! Just read it and I am harder than steel now. Where the hell was MY Nathan's Dad when I was young??? ha ha. Everything you say in the story is exactly what I would have loved to experience with an older neighbor. Would have loved to been worked over the same way. Hope to God you are writing a Part 3
Posted by mark i loved it......keep up the good work
Posted by Jeff MacDonald Hey Mike and Mark, Thank you and everyone else for your kind words and enthusiasm. I think maybe I will get around to writing a Part III . To be honest, I find Nathan’s dad to be pretty hot too and therefore feel one more chapter is needed. Presently, I am working on story which I think you will find quite exciting. It’s about a young kid who goes off to college and has an affair with his professor who first became his mentor, and then his lover. I should have it posted sometime this week. Tell me, which part of the story between Nathan’s dad and the teenager did each you find the most arousing?
Posted by Mike ALL OF IT! hahaha. I guess for me, the massage in the pool, Dad taking control of the situation, and then the teen working Dad over once again in Part 2 and not letting Dad lend a hand in it. The teen was now an expert in making Dad explode. It was just awesome how in that short span of time, Nathan's Dad helped the teen experience a lot of fun. The only part I did not get into was the whole baby powder/lotion thing. I'm sure that's just me though. The massage on the bed with oil would have been goodm but like I said, just me. The cherry popping scene was totally awesome. I lost mine to an older guy also and, like Nathan's Dad, patient and gentle, but aggressive and controlling of the situation also. He made sure I knew he was taking my virginity.
Posted by Jeff MacDonald Hey Mike, Thanks for you reply. I will start on Part III and we will see how much more fun Nathan’s dad and the teen have together.
Posted by David Green Jeff after reading part I of your story I didn't think it would be possible for you to top it...no pun intended...however, you managed to do just that! This was to fucking hot for words. There's something about a grown man teaching a young teen boy about sex and sexuality. It can be beautiful, sexy and hot. You captured all three!
David Green
Posted by Jeff MacDonald Thanks David for your comments--Think we need one more part to the story, so I will do a III.
Posted by Brian Good story. THe love between you 2 really comes out. The way you put it in words is amazing. Keep up the good work. Please e-mail me if you want to talk.