Posted by Trent Bickford God, I love this story about the teen and Nathan’s Dad. It’s almost like a love story filled with hot steamy sex and passion. And, I feel like I am getting to know the characters really well. Nathan’s dad is definitely helping the teen to discover who he really is. Both guys are hot too. Keep on writing more chapters,Jeff---plezzzzz. FYI: That emergency room part was just too much--loved it!
Posted by Mike Jeff, great follow up chapter and VERY NICE CLIFFHANGER!!! Look forward to what 6 may bring. Very cool that you keep this story moving. Usually when some of these guys write multi chapters, I get bored by like Part 3. Yours is very well done.
Posted by Jeff Thanks Mike and Trent. One thing for sure, you can bet that the teen's female cousin is going find out about the teen and Nathan's dad. Just what happens-- I don't know yet. But it will e hot.
Posted by Raul
Hi Jeff, Your kind of storytelling is really good...the more chapters u write, it becomes better and better. Keep up your good work.
Posted by sam i like ur story its perfect but am dying to find out more so plz just tel me when the other story is going to come up cool.........u rock
Posted by marcos wow, the story line is great and the follow up was good. keep it up. i agree with trent, the story is filled with love and sex which is well-written. keep it up.
Posted by Brian Jeff,
your story is amazing. It makes me so hot reading about you and Nathan's dad. Yes, if any other stories come up, I'm reading them. YOu're and awesome story writer.
Posted by Barry This is an awsome story!!! When Natian's dad shaved him, I thought I would explode. Please get the next chapter out soon!!!! Thanks for the great work
Posted by Mike I'm mesmerized by the sheer passion and tendernss of this truly unique saga Jeff. So many mind blowing orgasms, and they just keep getting better. You must be a supreme sexualist to write like this. I can imagine myself as your Nathan's dad. Can't wait to read the next chapter