Posted by Trigger Smith I just read all your stories and they are incredibly intriguing in so many ways. The way you describe an entirely different world that not many people know of and how you have the characters interact together is aww inspiring. I seriously can't wait to figure out what happens with Dawn and Daze.
Posted by nick I just read all your stories and i loved them i got to say out of all the stories i read on here yours are by far the best I came across yet i cant wait to find out what happens with Dawn & Daze so please finish this story i hate it whn someone wrights a good story but never finish it
Posted by bren Fucking amazing, and so thrilling! I can't wait for the next section. Please make it a long one and not just a page.
Posted by Adam (Author) Im sorry my friends, I know ive taken a long break between chapters. Believe me when i say there is a lot more to come. But like everyone else, times are hard. Having to work for so little pay. I have so many chapters, plus other books too, but just no time to write them all down. Trust me, im far from finished, and just at the beginning. Our unlikely couple still have so many troubles to face and much more love to feel. More enemies than any person should ever face, and allies to close, they would die to protect them. Just bare with me, i have been working on Of Heaven and Hell for over 4 years now. And i hope it will be published in the future, if enough people support me.
Posted by Hardus Amazing. Such a good story. Hope you will continue very soon.
Posted by Romeo Please finish this great story! I hate when the good stories are not finish.
I can't wait to see what other problems Dawn and Daze have to face. I think it's great how you made two completely different people from completely different worlds fall in love. It shows how their love is stronger than anything and will last forever.
I hope you do make this into a book because I really would buy it.
Posted by óô Do not worry about not being published. This story would sell just like the Twilight Saga....
Posted by James I hate to be mean or over eger but could please post the next part to this story
Posted by Adan Estel (author) I should have checked these recently. A while back i decided not to post anymore on here, for fear that no publisher would publish if it was already out to the public. I have already completed to chapter 13 with other chapters for later on, just dont know where to place them yet. Still dont think its wise to post anymore, but if anyone is interested, i dont mind giving sneak previews to anyone interest in helping me review. Email me at Phyr_Phoenix@yahoo.com anytime and say "OHnH" in subject and I'll know who you are and how you got my email, it might take me a while to email you back, i work too much, but i will email you back. Thank you all so much for your comments. Daze and Dawn thank you too.
Posted by vatsan dude , why r u not continuing the story , pls continue
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