Posted by Andrew at first it was great... but i hate how the story ends like that. i really makes me cry when i read that... good flow by the way!
Posted by Altair Cooper So sad and beautiful I was crying from my eyes and penis! Well written and very sad at the end.
Posted by BlacklightVirus I didn't want to kill him but I wrote this for a competition on a forum and there was a theme and the character was required to die.