Keep up the great writing!
Posted by EB You have me hooked, please keep writing
Posted by Borg Continue with your story, you are good.
Posted by chris you are amaying the stories are great and so are the characters i can wait to read what happens next
Posted by Zerotenks Great...Keep it coming. I don't know how this is going to play out because I remember that in college they were not together but its whatever. I know you going to get to that point.
Posted by Rakesh Kumar please don't keep waiting Brad, his real love is Bryan and let Bryan feel that he also can't live without Brad. Brad is his Love for what Bryan has been searching for.
Posted by Rick I can't wait to hear part 4!
Posted by Aceith I love it! im ready for a twist! lol
faved your profile. i shall be stalking it. lol
Posted by manek Where's the next part.!
Posted by BookReader WHERES THE 4th!!!! I NEED IT
Posted by willy your the best writer in the world i hope this is your profession because if not your seriously wasting a talent ive only read one other story like this and this one topps it by far if you write another one please get in touch
Posted by david Man yo u need to come up with the fourth part for realz.. Lovin the story I just found this site n ur story was the 1st I read and I'm hooked haha ur doing a great job... Loves it haha Ur fan ;-p lol
Posted by jonny please post part four!!!
Posted by joey these are good write more please
Posted by wow500 Oh my fucking GAWD that was goood!!!! Wow, I mean WOW. Please have a next one. Wow, that was...WOW! I love where this story is going.WOW. Oh by the way did I say WWWWOOOOWWW!!!!!!!!!!!!
Posted by Jared this is great! keep it going man!
Posted by Josh OMG!! I've got to know more!! Please email the next story to me PLEEEEEZ!! joshuashnnn@yahoo.comPosted by Josh OMG!! I've got to know more!! Please email the next story to me PLEEEEEZ!!
He lay there placidly – waiting for my kiss. I ran my hand over his torso underneath his shirt and then swiftly leant down to his lips and stuck my tongue down his throat...