Posted by Mike I really don't understand why this story has such a high rating (9.5 at the time of me reading it)
It is very immaturely written with poor grammar and poor spelling. There is no character exposition and no storyline to speak of.
Total shit - I'm afraid.
Posted by óô AMAZING
Posted by guyyyyyyyyy Hot!
Posted by Paul Forget the other reveiws.Ifound it great and had a great wank as a result of it.Well done buddy.Keep up the great work.I give it a 10