Posted by Joe That was so awesome! And to think other superficial teen bullcrap stories get a high rating... You took me away from reality and emersed me into your fantasy. It was great. You really paid attention to detail and explaining things for the perceptive reader. The notion of 'father and son' was a great addition to the prison context and was quite funny at times. Cheers buddy on your great story telling!!
Posted by Gary Great story, great writing... Love the straight guy conquest stories the most, write a few myself, but love your twist of the straight guy being taken by another straight guy. Thought a few pages back that you were going to pull it around for Sike and Jack to find out that they were biological father and son. Had that thought crossed your mind? Anyway, loved it, maybe I'll submit a few of mine here...thanks for a couple of good boners..Gary
Posted by eddie thanks for the great story... Don't know what to say, other than wow... i've started reading some the stories throughout this site and came across yours and was mind blown. I will agree with Joe, the detail in your writing really took me on a journey. I couldn't stop reading your article. It is a shame that it isn't complete, would love to read the ending. If you've got more stories like this please do post. Will keep an eye out for them. Cheers
Posted by Rhys Best Story Evar! I had numerous amount of wanks to this story
Posted by Martin Excellent story, fucking horny
Posted by Bob Davis A BIG DITTO to all of the above comments. Besides the "Sex on Fire" scenes, which fulfilled some of my fantasies, your character development really fleshed the dad and son out superbly. The only disappointment was not having more to read. You left us hanging with so many direction possibilities: 1) Phil's promise to Jack of some gangbang action. 2) the beginning of Jack and Sikes'true love for each other. 3) their continued relationship after they left the slammer 4) a possible triangle with Harry, Sikes, & Jack. DON'T STOP NOW! Loved it all.
Posted by Peter I agree, this is the best story ive read in a very long time.
Whens the next part coming out? Got me in suspense now!
Cant wait to read more...
Posted by Josh I love this story. The detail put into it easily allows me to dive inside the story and picture myself in Jack's shoes.
I was reading this story when it was on nifty.org, but I lost the link. Then, upon finding it here too, I just started from the begining again.
I would love it if you'd finish the story, but until then, I'll enjoy whats here :)
Posted by Jay sumerville Omfg... I think I just chummed about 8 times when reading it. Great work. I love how Sike is sooo over powering and how innocent the son is. Ohhhh ot was too good. All I could think of is the first tome my dad fuck me and how much I chummed then. I would love to see a video of that so I could really see what it is like!!! Just for tue record I am 19 still living with my mum and dad and while iam sitting here in my dads briefs jizzin all over the place they are down the stairs having dinner. So thnk you very much for such an aammaazziinnggg read!!!xxxx33 BRAW!!!
Posted by brooks fucking hot story man,,,,how true is it? smile
Posted by shawn amazing story!