Posted by Brad One of the most descriptive sexy, exhilarating stories I ever read :) I couldn't stop reading ! Can you possible make a sequel??
Posted by Jim Omg this is beautiful, im crying, please please make another part of this, a sequal, please tell us what happens next please??
Its such a great story, its one of the best storys that i have read on this website in ages.
Posted by Asher People, don't be deceived- this is plagiarised from another author: if you type 'Help!' into the search bar, you will find another author submitted these series of stories well before and this guy has just copied it. Shame on you Malik s boykins
Posted by mitchell omg that was a great story!! good job, i loved it.
Posted by Malik S. Boykins I'm not taking credit for writing, I just thought it needed a proper name.Once again I'm not taking credit.
Posted by Gh You stole this story from Web Cam! And did you mention it in the story that you didn't wrote it?
Posted by Asher Why would it need a proper name? It already has a proper name- "Help!". There was no mention before or throughout the story that you didn't write it. You are giving the incorrect impression to every reader that you wrote this.
Posted by Bran Yeah im with Gh on this one! this isnt your story, you cant take credit for something that aint yours....
Posted by Web Cam Lol! Oh dear. Malik S. Boykins - I'm glad that you liked the story so much and I appreciate your effort. However, I'm kind of disappointed that I didn't even get a mention in a copy of my own story lol. For those who are interested, I was the original author of this story and the real name for it is "Help!". You can find this, and all of my other stories on my author profile page, which you can get to by clicking on the "authors" tab at the very top of the page. I am on the 1st page of authors, currently 13th from the top. You may also be interested to know that I am in the middle of writing a brand new story. :) (comment posted : 04/08/2011)
Posted by Malik S. Boykins Yes, sorry about that I completely forgot about doing that, like really I did.
Posted by Web Cam It's fine. At least my story is once again recieving really nice comments and is being read by new people. :)
Posted by Sam That was an awesome story! Great job you did writing it.
Posted by orion very good story
I saw them,they both shot their cum at the same time, Mike shot his load right on my book on the table, and fucking Jack shot his load as strong as a gun and it hit my shoe. Mike's face was pale' he fell on the floor like he was trying to escape...