Posted by Romeo Nice story but you need to prove read before posting.
Your story was confusing. You kept switching the roles. Try to keep who's saying and doing what straight.
I hope chapter 2 is longer and better writen. No disrespect.
Posted by werty great story
cant wait for part 2.
please post longer installments.10 out of 10.
Posted by shash am sorry but half way you got confused with your characters. before the movie eddie was the straight, eddie kissed Dave. During the movie you seemed to have made Dave the gay one and Eddie the Straight guy. confusing.... check your characters pls.
Posted by david fucking DAMNgoodStory
Posted by Eddie Awesome story, thanks