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Posted by kvp even if jp does to kyle what hurts him, it is so evident jp is very scared himself.one just has to forget the sex portions, concentrate on the storyline and it becomes so chilly. dear mark james, you will perhaps laugh, but your story reminds me of george orwells 1984.as it happens with every story that is DIFFERENT the reader starts expecting.this is one story that has possibilities,what is it doing here in a porn site?
Posted by kvp even if jp does to kyle what hurts him, it is so evident jp is very scared himself.one just has to forget the sex portions, concentrate on the storyline and it becomes so chilly. dear mark james, you will perhaps laugh, but your story reminds me of george orwells 1984.as it happens with every story that is DIFFERENT the reader starts expecting.this is one story that has possibilities,what is it doing here in a porn site?