I enjoyed your yarn ... HOWEVER... you sure need to run a spell check over your work. Lots of real peculiar "howlers" in there. Otherwise, most entertaining and amusing. Keep it up.
Cheers
Posted by Ken I really liked this story. It even had humor in it.
I have like your previous stories.
Posted by Athan Wow, this is REALLY good! It takes me back to the days of Summer Camp...minus the kissing and romance. Anyway...Nice work! I love the narrative style you used.
Posted by MR.D REMINDED ME OF MY FIRST LOVE
Posted by David Rogers good story hope u 2 are still together
Posted by joe omg this is good it remdis me of summer camp just the same i mad gay love with frinds were not togther now but we had fun when it was hot in the tent
John crawled up to the bed, especially to Henry’s firm body. His lips were pursuing Henry’s and as they met, the sound of kissing was the only sound they heard at that moment. John broke the kiss and licked Henry’s ear...