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Posted by Mike
A good story that was building up quite nicely and then it was ruined by the sudden change of tempo and the introduction of the fuck session far too early on.
A pity it was ruined by an indecent haste - worth 4 out of 10 - BUT could have been worth a lot more if it had caried on its original vein.
Posted by Patrick J
I liked it.. Nice job. I sort of agree with Mike.. I'm not as picky about the story line unless is completely screwed up.. Nice Job .. 8+..
Posted by Trent
I agree, I liked the story. It was cute, short and to the point. Not all stories need to be long and drawn out. And sometimes in real life fuck sessions happen right away. The writer kept my intrest all the way through it. I give it a 9.
Posted by Mike also
Mike just happens to be looking for Shakespeare on here I guess. LOL kidding Mike : )
Posted by Lord Akisho
that story was definatly hott, i loved it, write more like it id love to read em
Posted by A
A great story that i thought was just long enough. If it had been any longer it wouldnt hav been as good. write another! i giv it a 9
Posted by Jim
Great stor I Give this at least a 6 ******
Posted by loyd
very nice
Posted by Ducky
I say you should write a series of this story. I like this story. I wish I was the one being fucked by the guy.
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