Posted by Maz azure skies... what the fuck are you on mate???
azure skies - what a joke!!!
Posted by Zack To Maz: There is nothing wrong with "azure skies". Stone Pierce is only using an extensive vocabulary which could help a lot of authors on this site. If you are going to criticize someone's work, at least criticize something more than one mere phrase. To Stone: The story is actually compelling to me because it has a genuine sense of spontaneity. However, you could elaborate a little more as far as eroticism is concerned, in my opinion. Overall, though, I look forward to some sequels in the future :-)
Posted by Josh Thank you, Zack. No one gets that these days. Now, Stone, verry sexy. Can't wait to read more, and Diego is the kind of guy I've been looking for my whole life. Lets just say, you've created an ink angel. =)
Posted by Leo what a great story!
Posted by Rod Great Story...I could feel the actions
Posted by Ambudz Super story. 5 star all the way.
Posted by vishi amazing story ! I have a very good imagination . . Every line and description of setting and sexual tension was felt buddy. Well written
Posted by danbambam Stone, not only is your story amazing. You managed to do that with a superb and enticing vocabulary.
I voted 10 and am looking forward to sequels as well as new stories.
Posted by Brad Great job!!!
Posted by duane Very well written... kudos. No detail left out.
Posted by Brock I would love for this fuck fest to continue. Maybe Diego taking all that big man meat up his love chute for the first time for him.
Story is very very hot, made me hard as a rock.
Thanks
Posted by Web Cam Fantastic story! One of the best i have read! I would love to read more. :)
Posted by jhon please more!!
Posted by vern bellner jr great story love the tenderness......
Posted by Alex Man you made me cum like 3 times reading this story. Black and Latino is my dream mix. Sadly I'm neither but it's good to look at lol. Awesome story and I plan on reading the other 2