Revarsal of Fortune

(Part 3 from 4. Fiction.)

Charlie walked back to the shack like he was walking on air. He laughed to himself when he thought about how his mother used to be so interested in the events of his day. But since his father went off to prison, and they moved from the estate, his mother was usually in a drunken stupor by noon. As sad as that was, Charlie would love to see how she’d respond to today’s events. He imagined this scenario.

How was your day sweetie?

Oh mother! It was simply marvelous. I have made friends with a poor Hispanic boy. He’s invited me to his house tomorrow to celebrate our birthdays. He’s the greatest mother! You’d think we were cut from the same mold. He was born on the same day as I was, he jacks off with his right hand just like I do, but I think I do it more then he does. He say’s that he has a small cock like a hamster, but I think he just said to make me feel better. Silly me! I admitted to him that I have a tiny cock like ever other male Brisbane. Boy of boy! Mother, he sure has taught me a lot. All of the money in the world can’t buy me a bigger cock or two seconds of happiness. Don’t you agree mother? Okay well, Bottoms up! I’ve got homework to do.

Charlie hoped that nobody was watching him as he walked down the street alone, laughing his ass off. He finally did get home and just as he suspected, his mother was half in the bag.

Charlie hardly slept a wink because he was too excited about going over to Eduardo’s house. He tried on everything in his closet at least 3 times. He grabbed $300 from his mother’s wallet and the keys to the black Land Rover. Charlie set out to go buy something new for what he felt was a special occasion. He got to Neiman-Marcus right at 10:00 when they opened. Nothing caught his eye and it all looked to colorful. He wanted to play it down for Eduardo’s family. He ended up spending 10 minutes and $75 at Marshalls and getting to Eduardo’s right on time.

Before Charlie even got to the front door, he heard a younger boys voice. “Eddie, your friend the white boy is here.” Then Charlie heard an older voice say: "No pendejo! You mean; Eddie your white boyfriend is here.” followed by laughter at the level of a comedy club.

Charlie was rushed by a group of females as soon as he entered the living room. He soon learned that they were Eduardo’s mother, aunt, and a few sisters. The 7 or 8 guys sitting around didn’t move a muscle.

“Hi Charlie, I’m Eddie’s mom, Connie. This is Eddie’s aunt, Anita. These are his sisters Becky, Flora, and Christina. Now the rest of these guy’s here, you see them?” Eduardo’s mom said. 

“Fuck them! Don’t you pay any attention to them, okay?” She said.

Charlie wondered if he should have listened to what Eduardo wanted to tell him. His next thought was to pretend that he was at the wrong house and politely excuse himself. But then he heard Eduardo’s voice. “Tell him to come back here!” 

He was told that it was the last door on the left. He headed down the hallway and the door opened by itself, as he was about to knock. He saw Eduardo peak his head around and pulled the door back so Charlie could enter the room. It was smaller then the closet in Charlie’s old bedroom. Eduardo looked very different with his hair still dripping wet. Charlie looked for a place to sit among the unmade bed that was covered with clothes. The boxer shorts caught his immediate attention. He turned to find Eduardo still wrapped in a tattered yellow towel.

“Did those assholes say shit to you?” Eduardo asked.

Charlie was shocked. He told Eduardo that he thought that his mother was very nice. He said that same about his aunt and sisters. 

“Not them, the guy’s” Eduardo said.

“No, they didn’t even move. But I told you Eduardo, I’m don’t care what they say. I’ll make up my own mind.”

“Yeah, you just remember that!” Eduardo said with a tone of uncertainty.

Charlie asked Eduardo if he could call him Eddie too. Eddie said that he would like that very much, but he also told Charlie that he had a surprise for him. Charlie looked around the room, but there were just as many pieces of clothing on the floor as there was on the bed. Eddie pointed to a red & white cooler.

“Look in there and toss me one” Eddie said.

Charlie got up from the bed and went to the ice cooler. It was full of beer and he got two out and twisted off the caps. He handed one to Eddie and was about to sit back down.

“Wait! Come here.” Eddie said.

Charlie looked at Eddie as he stood up. Eddie held out his beer and said “Cheers! Happy Birthday Bro.”

The tapped their bottles together and took a swig. Charlie had never had Mexican beer before and it made him burp loudly. He looked for a place to throw away the bottle caps and Eddie pointed to a small bowl that was full of them on Eddie’s night table. 


Charlie actually liked the taste of the beer and was surprised the he was on the last swig of the first bottle. He was going to mention it to Eddie. As soon as Charlie turned to sit back on the bed, the beer in his mouth went spraying out like a water cannon.

“What happened? Eddie said. He couldn’t stop laughing as beer foam came dripping from Charlie’s nose.

“Holy Fuck! Exactly how big are hamsters in Mexico?” Charlie said. 

Eddie had removed his towel and standing there butt naked using the towel to dry his hair. The movement of drying his hair was causing Eddie’s dick to swing from side to side like the pendulum in a grandfather clock. He couldn’t help but stare right at Eddie’s penis and Eddie didn’t seem at all bothered by having it stared at.

“What happened to being hung like a hamster?” Charlie inquired.

“Oh this. I guess I sort of lied about this. I just did it because you looked so worried when we were talking about sizes and stuff. I was just trying to make you feel better. You aint mad are you.” Eddie said looking very worried.

“Nah! I sort of figured you where stretching the truth. I just didn’t think you where stretching that much.”

Eddie finished drying his hair while Charlie watched Eddies cock giggle to and fro. Charlie must have assumed that Eddie couldn’t see with the towel over his head. But with as tattered as the towel was, Charlie learned that he was not taking in a private show.

“Dude! There’s a camera in my top drawer. You can take a picture if you want.” Eddie said peaking through a hole in the towel.

Charlie’s face went bright red as he started to apologize. He couldn’t remember the last time that he has felt so “caught” that he looked right at the floor as he continued to mumble an explanation that made a particular point. It basically meant that he wasn’t looking in a sexual way, but more out of intrigue over its incredible size.

Eddie set Charlie straight, so to speak. “Damn white boy! I’m just fucking with you. If I cared about you seeing my dick, do you think I would have let you see me naked? You’ll catch on sooner or later, I hope. The next time you think that I’m serious, stop and think for a second, okay?” Eddie said.

Charlie wasn’t exactly sure what Eddie meant, but he quickly agreed if only to drop the subject of his admiration of Eddie’s penis.

Eddie and Charlie went back out with the others and his mom quickly maneuvered them out to the patio with the girls. As the women started to scoop huge amounts of food on plates, Charlie watched Eddie interact with his sisters. It was something Charlie knew nothing about. But he mistakenly took a comment by Eddie’s oldest sister Flora, the wrong way.

“Damn Eddie! That vato is fine!” Eddie’s sister said unaware that Charlie could hear. By the end of the night, Charlie would know that Flora didn’t think Charlie was cute because she was interested. He’d know that she was telling her brother that she approved of Charlie and hoped that things would work out between he and Eddie.

Soon it was dark and Charlie couldn’t believe how much fun he was having. He really liked Eddie and more then that he liked the way things where between them. He had never had a friend expose himself naked like that before. When you grow up like Charlie, some of those Victorian values have survived the generations and modesty was at the top. Seeing Eddie nude and spending hours with regular people made Charlie feel like a normal person for once in his life. Charlie began to feel like their friendship was on uneven ground. He suddenly had the feeling that he needed to let Eddie see him nude, but how to go about that was something entirely different. He just wanted to show Eddie something private that was reserved for not just anyone. And fuck intrigue! It was sexual. Charlie got hot from the sight of Eddie’s cock and he was okay with it. How wouldn’t be, it was one hell of a cock.

Charlie thought about his mother and all to quickly that good feeling was leaving and he felt himself slipping right back to being a spoiled little rich boy. Charlie was not going to be robbed of this great feeling and he made up hid mind right then. Tonight he was going to defy his mother’s wishes and invite Eddie to his house. Not someday, not even soon, but tonight.

“Let’s go for a ride Eddie.” Charlie said.

“Okay cool! But hang on a second. Let me call my sister over here really quick like. I want you to suck on her tits, there the bomb dude, wait and see!” Eddie said.

Charlie’s jaw nearly landed in his lap. But this time his shock lasted a few seconds. “Oh man! You’re fucking with me aren’t you?” Charlie said.

Eddie almost fell out of his chair with laughter. Charlie laughed a little too and said:
“I’m getting better though. You only had me for a few seconds Eddie.”

“I’m hoping for more than a few seconds bro.” Eddie said softly.

The expression on Eddie’s face was the most lustful look that has ever been cast in Charlie’s direction. It was out there unambiguous and it couldn’t be taken back. Charlie heard it loud and clear and he sat there in awe of the chance that Eddie had just taken. Charlie new that he had to say something. The message had been sent. It was received, and now it had to be either accepted, or denied. 

“It’s our birthday Eddie. Haven’t you made a wish yet? I have, and mine just came true.” Charlie said. 

They couldn’t get up and out of that house fast enough. It’s a wonder that they didn’t knock over furniture as the scrambled to the front door. Charlie’s Land Rover peeled rubber up the street headed in the direction of his house. It was amazing how uncertain they both became, as they got closer to Charlie’s house.

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