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Posted by h
choose a piont of view man..
Posted by d_201
Great story, but H has a "point." Get one point of view and stick with it. shifting from first person to third person was confusing.
Posted by Mike
that made me horny as hell! I had to jack off to it!
Posted by Tim
Fuck i couldnt stop myself from beating off. If only my mates were like that
Posted by Nathan
WOW, I'm 15 and I thought I was gay before I read this story, now i know I'm gay. Thank you for this amazing story and please, please, please make a sequal!
Posted by Gabriel
The story is so HOT! Unforetunately the writing couldnt be better.
Posted by feankie
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Posted by rye
Be careful on third to first person changes they exist here. Also watch for spelling errors, (ex. 'meh' for me), the easiest way to eliminate this is through Microsoft word (if the situation permits) and lastly watch for your diction as this defines the character when you’re telling a story from first person. As well you can use this to your advantage for sealing the deal on his thoughts or feelings. Within the story markers exist to state that the character believes that he's straight, however, words show that he has 'previous' experience or is /not/ straight.
Posted by Lost Love
I liked this story a lot. Its sweet.
Posted by Romeo
Who's telling this story. First person or third person. It was really confusing but a good story.
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