Posted by Brandon I really liked it. But why did Theo have to die? :(
Posted by GlenAllen Oh wow! That was such a good, tragic story. Like something out of a shakespear novel =)
Posted by Angel Oh my god ,it is sooo sad,hope next chap will be soon cant wait ,keep it up
Posted by Justsayinnothatein Horrible would have been great I there was a good ending
Posted by Gabe Thats a very sad story. Can you make a happy ending. the zipped was one of the thugs who started fighting among themselves, and Theo ran away somewhere safe.
Dave finds him later.
Posted by taurus oh, what a great story it would have been....the boy just died too soon. it's okay though
Posted by ian Wat a stupid story, hate iit! U people can never discribe rich people!
Posted by Anthony Horrobin a nice love story, I love gay sex but that was really nice but sad, well done . love from Tony x x x
Posted by orion so sad, this should never happend.
Posted by Chris Thankyou for your comments, ill get straight onto story!
Posted by Elliot Awsome awsome awsome!!! I love sad love stories they remind me of how mylife used to be plz keep writing have David go crazy and hire people to kill the gang
Posted by Jake Absolutely wonderful story!
I LOVED it! :)
Posted by Chris (author) if i get this good.. will you guys want me to write a sequel ?