Posted by Brad Smith It’s incredible how you think up so many great story ideas. Then, you are consistently able to change your writing style to fit the story and the characters. Great Job!
Posted by Athan That was a really great story. Not too much, not too little. You got a little lax in the middle, but you came out strong in the end. I love that quote, "No Biggie, but ypu're still a keeper." Keep up the good work!
Posted by Nick confuseing at points, but for the most part still VERY hott and still a good story line. just work on the dialouge a little.
Posted by me i like it.
Posted by Jon had to read it twice, but still hot!
Posted by Eddy I think it was really good. It really paints a picture in your mind.
Posted by Aaron Hunt u r my favorite writter i have read all of your stories.i have read this stoty like 20 times and i still think its HOTT!!!!!! i've even saved it in my favorites.. keep up the good work.
Posted by Hyatt Ando Great story! Some spelling and grammar mistakes, but otherwise it's great. Is it a true story?
Posted by dj that wuz cool
Posted by albsexy That was cool reminds me of my early days well told keep them cumming
Posted by albsexy That was cool wish I had had a friend like that great storey well told write the next part please