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Posted by Jake Rellin
You've got a good start here and I look forward to reading the rest.
I write too, and you could really improve your stories by writing the words out fully ('you instead of 'u') and by using punctuation and capital letters in the speech marks.
"I'm Tom byt the way." instead of “im Tom by the way”
Posted by Mike
a really good story - goood descriptive writing - try not to use text speak to make it perfect - write "you" not "u" please.
Posted by bryan
whoever is the author if this, i really like the flow of the story....even though there's no sex discussions..i can't wait to read them falling in love with each other............
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