Posted by J. Rodriguez Really good, I enjoyed it. Liked your description of the main characters psychosis. It kind of paralleled my thoughts as I was reading this, in the back of my mind I was thinking "please don't be a series", it kept repeating until I read your comment as the end. And in my opinion Fire in the Firehouse should have ended when it stopped taking place in a firehouse. Seriously though, you could probably write a gay version of War of the Worlds what with all the crazy shit you put those two guys through, just think a gay meteorologist caught up in a martian invasion trying to get back to his lover! I'm pretty sure you could pull it off. But any ways I'm glad your still around and that you decided to leave Sean and Randy alone.
Posted by Anir hey man ur really good at writing..!!!!
are u a professional???anyhow u were great!!! post more stories!!!u should write really shud!!!more!!!-Anir
Posted by Mikey No I'm not a professional writer. :) I just really connected to this story. Since I accepted the fact I'm gay and reflect(ed) on things I didn't do in my life, a story like this has been on my mind this time of year for some time now. I really put my own feelings of wonderment into the story. I've always wondered about these young men that head off to college, a whole new world open to them and then by some chance get involved in sexual relations w/other men. Do they just do it because they're horny? Do they beat themselves up for crossing a line they never expected? Do they fall in love? What goes on in their minds? So, as Thanksgiving approached, it fell upon me again and this year I had to share the story. I'd be willing to bet it happened in some form somewhere this year to at least one guy.
Posted by Ken I wondered what happened with Fire since there were only two chapters left. Anyway this is an excellent story and excellently written but then that is always the way you write. I really loved this story. Hope you write more of them. Thanks so much
Posted by Sebastien terrific. although the trying to hang himself scene was a bit unnecessary, i felt everything else seemed real and very touching. it's quite subtle but an effective story...kinda wished there was more sex scene though...oh well, it was a lovely read.
Posted by Mikey I purposely avoided the sex being too obvious. Too many erotic stories are always about topping/bottoming/cock sucking and the like. I want to show that not all gay stories need to be saturated in sex. I feel there needs to be more light shed on gay love in gay erotica and gay porn. I appreciate your views just the same. I try to make my readers really stretch their minds to what happens between the days I explore. And what happens after, as though the characters continue living beyond the story. Just a heads up guys. I'm mentally toying w/a new story. I had this idea hit me like a ton of bricks tonight. It'll be a small mini series, but not like Fire In The Firehouse by any stretch of the word. 2008 is a safe bet. :)
Posted by Zoran This has got to be one of the best stories i have ever read, so happy to see that there is a story thts not too full of sex. Great going mate! ;)
Posted by nick blake yo dude this was a great story i would like to hear more about it its the best one that i seen on here. sean sounds a lot like me im in love with my roommate and i also didnt think it would work when we left each other for break but it did
Posted by Nicky Hey,
It was a terrific story, I would like to suggest you write just one more part with more of this story. I lightly recognize myself in Sean and I would like to read more about it.
I like the way you write stories like these, please go on, you're an excellent writer.
Posted by Nicky Great storie! Please write more about it.
I really love your stories and your style is great.
You're an excellent writer. Keep going!
Posted by jordan Ill I can say is wow u got talent, Thanks for writing this story it kept me occupied
Posted by Romeo No offense man but this story was to long to be one sided. If Sean wanted to know how Randy felt, why didn't he called. Through the whole story Sean waited for Randy to call but not once did he call Randy. However, I do agree with you not to turn it into a series.
As for Fire In The Firehouse, I knew you wouldn't finish it! You writers never finish a story that worth finishing. I guess you one of those writers who never finish what they started!
If your next story and/or series isn't worth reading, don't expect a review from me. I'm the reader that will tell you the truth no matter if it hurts your feelings or not!
Posted by me Enjoyed the whole story..Luv yah
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