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Posted by Adam
I think that was great, on page 3...wow...that was...holy shit man.That was completely shocking but it was great at the same time.I love all ur stories. I think their fanstastic.
Posted by bob
Wow this story is great.. hopefully it doesn't turn too weird.. i love it how you always manage to find a way to change your stories around. Like in the middle of the detention series you started to do different perspectives.. and now this is just great keep it up dude
Posted by Michael Booker
This series gets weirder, darker and more complex. Very much the opposite of Detention. Part seven is definitely going to be really crazy. Just to let people know.
Posted by Renee
Wow! It just gets better & better! You've really piqued my interest with this one! I especially like the part where Patrick approaches Sean in the bathroom and then you cut to them in bed, sfter the sex. The act was omitted, but just the implication of what had transpired was more than enough! Wow! It was quietly erotic, but packed a massive punch! Bravo!
Posted by Ian
Like my buddy, Renee, says..."Wow!". I am officially addicted!
Posted by Cod
Now,even me,I’m totally speechless!You simply caught me out of guard with this lowery chapter in this ghastly gothic story!All the questions that bounced after reading this chapter for the first time are already’ve been asked by Sean and what irritates me the most is that we’ll have to wait for about a month to be answered! I’m willing to put all my money that those answers lie in Patricks journal.“He was supposed to be the first to go...”?!?At least I can trust my best friends!And Rose is next to go and maybe go find Danny?Could Kevin be the guy Danny was in the toilet with,giving him a blow-job?These are some questions of my own.By the way you describe Patrick as an angel-faced psychotic person (serial-killer possibly?) covered in shadows and full of secrets at least and all this seems to originate,issue and relate to Patrick’s father mysterious death!
I’m sorry Michael,this review is my first reaction to this gory turn the story got to and frankly my friend you left me plain startled!I’m gonna ask you once more though whether you are a psychiatrist or psychologist and if you’re not you would have been a succesful one!You are an eminent,charismatic and endued author that’s for sure;your stories are original,unconventional and exquisite that make your readers bound and get kindled and excited with them!In our eyes we’ve got a first class Love-Drama with so many literarily virtues:I’m happy that I was one of the few that realized this on time!
Please,hurry up with the installment!That’s all for the time being!
Posted by .........
Kool, way 2 go Mr Booker :D
Posted by Kat
This was definetely worth waiting for, can't wait for 7.
Posted by Cod
Normally,Michael,I write and post my reviews after reading the chapter for the first time and before reading the other reviews;not out of arrogance and vanity,but along for attempting to comment the story as far as it is feasible to materialize it by myself.Thereinafter I read the other reviews to see what the rest readers fell about it!Sorry guys,I don’t mean to sound smart or anything,it’s just how I accustomed to work!This happened yesterday!So,when I read your comment regarding the installment of the story,that it gets weirder, darker and more complex as that part seven is definitely going to be really crazy,I’m more than certain that you are thrifty and parsimonious in your details!Frankly my fellow-readers I’m predicting and expecting a complete chaos in the next chapter!
This will be the last time that I’ll praise and write up your unchallengeable auctorial talent;it’s silly,tiresome and annoying after all,to accentuate the obvious,despite the uncontested fact you totally deserve it!Every new story of yours is nonidentical, prototypical and unique,attainment of a great and endued author indeed!And an agnostic too?
Enough with the complements,lets talk some more about the story itself.A genuine A class Thriller in a site with erotic gay stories;felicitations mate!You tricked us though with this story making us believe,at first glance,that it’s a typical love story about two best friends:one gay,secretly in love with his straight buddy,that eventually ends with the straight one reciprocating to the feelings of the gay,falling in love with him!I must admit though,that with a more cautious approximation it was transparent that there were more lying beneath!You kept giving us adequate indications about this,quite distinct only with a vigilantly look.Therefore the week before,awaiting for the installment of the story,I read it from the beginning more heedfully,noting that there still were some obscure and misty parts in it and mainly relatively to the mysterious e-mail Sean got and particularly its provenance and most important its implication and significance.As I’ve already told the answers lie in Paticks journal and his father’s mystrious death!Could he had been a molester father and what Patrck had to do with his death or killing to be more accurate?Could be the gun the same weapon that killed both Danny and Patrick’s dad?Afterall “he snatched it away as though he were taking back something that belonged to him...”Could Patrick had given the gun to Danny to assassinate Sean,since he was supposed to be the first one to go?I really wonder what will happen to Sean,while I can’t figure Patrick’s tepid recoil when he discovered that Sean heard his phone-call.Yet I actually relished how unreal,distant and misty you presented Patrick in Sean bathroom.In Greece there’s a saying that goes:“Show me your friends to tell you what kind of person you are”!So far Sean fell into adversity-leastwise-with the only two friends he had; both of them seem to be secretive,dusk,lowering and obsessed to the point of psychosis!Split personality is the most clement and mild attribute that could anyone reproach to Patrick,regarding his whimsical and fickle comportment towards Sean!It makes no sence at all!Psychotic is the most probable,consulting the fact we are dealing with an obsessed person,one of the main characteristics of psychosis.Not unlikely Danny suspected or found out in the process some things about Patrick’s deranged persona,but taking into account the obsession Sean had towards him made bottomless to get Sean ascertain who Patrick really is and mayby Danny’s felodese was the last and only way to make Sean establish this tragic and bitter factuality!
I delectate how fluently you use terms of psychopathology like “catatonic state” or “deja vu” as the fact that for the first time you entitled a chapter:shells!Very neat indeed, since now the shell that preserves and disguises all the Secrets starts to craze and the verity will finally transpire.If you resolve to edit your stories they’ll be a major success and best-sellers.It would be magnificent as well,to see them become movies or tv-serials!Anywise I can hardly wait for the next chapter!
Posted by Michael Booker
Good observations, Cod.
Posted by Cod
Thank you Michael for your awfully kind words!Whosoever naturally can comment,perceive and observe only what is by far obove the average,ergo it comes normally with your exquisite and slick stories.What I failed to mention in my notorious antecedent long review-hope you found it absorbing guys and not deadly mortal-is that I have the premonition that Danny had finaly divulged everything to Patrick about Sean’s emotions towards him,forcing this tragic turn of the events.You recall my extreme theory that Patrick have copied some parts of Sean’s journal,since Sean observed that the handwriting in the diary,he had found on his doorstep,often time expressed the mood he was in when he had writen that particular passage. By the way It’s hardly impossible for me to conceive the ratings in the last couple of chapters of Secrets:they were disproportional subdued considering their undisputed virtue!That can be amend;yet ease a little guys,it’s not all about sex!Anywise cheers to all and to you Michael in particular!
Posted by paolo marco
i love how this story is going. i really think it's good that you're taking it in a different direction than detention. you're one hell of a cool writer michael...
Posted by luis
i simply love this story. but i hope there is some stupid ass ending. please dont disappoint me.
Posted by Joel
Simply amazing, how you described the scene and everything that happened was awesome. I loved the drama you created and looking forward to see what happens next.
Posted by Mark
Not yet?
Posted by matt
Holy crap man these stories are amazing. I read all of them today. I never realized how in depth these stories can actually be. I, too, thought it would be some typical romance and sex story but it's so much more. I had no idea how you could connect all these things. You are such a great writer. This last story just left my dumbstruck. I'm still wondering about the whole Dark Bunny thing. God, there are so many questions that are running through my mind. I just can't wait til part 7. I really hope that in the end that Sean and Patrick will end up together. There's so much passion between them and they seem so great together. Maybe Patrick will feel completely sorry for everything. I just really think that they should be together. Maybe when Patrick would be about to kill Sean he would break down and start crying saying "I just can't do it. I love you." Then later they have sex with true love. That would be an awesome way to end the story. I also think it would be really cool if Sean and Rose got really close trying to survive all this. So common and hurry with part 7!
Posted by matt
How much longer is it going to be?
Posted by Cod
Dear Michael I don’t wish to sound too grouchy,but officially,since the last installment,passed 3 whole months!Besides,the basic corm of the new episode was allready structured,as you openly admited yourself in the review forum forewarning us that “This series gets weirder, darker and more complex...Part seven is definitely going to be really crazy...”I suppose I don’t speak just for myself,yet plain our impatience grows thick!Anywise cheers and hope to hear about Secrets soon!
Posted by Jeff
I started with part one this morning just browsing through the stories, but the way you leave us wanting more I couldn't stop until I read all 6 parts and even then I couldn't get enough, how long before 7 comes out, Im on the edge of my seat waiting.
Posted by orion
actually, it's been months since the last instllation of chapter 6.
I was taken aback by the turn of the event in the last chapter, and to tell you the truth, I didn't want Danny to die. He was an interesting character.
Posted by Caleb
I'm completely lost! You have such amazing talent. To be able to keep the main storyline and turn it into a mystery at the same time...WOAH. Can't wait for 7!
Posted by Monique
That is such a good story!
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