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Soldier's Story: Chapter 3 reviews

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Posted by Miggy

This is beautiful I swear! Please don't let it end.. This is my favorite series so far and also the When I'm With You by Kieran Lee.. You and Kieran are my two favorite authors! LIKE! SWEAR!!

Posted by taurus

i'm with u on that one Andy.......Alan must'nt die, he's a great guy. i've never read anything like this FUUUUUUCCK....i'm hooked.

Posted by luis

oh my god this is great i hadnt read anything like this, i absolutely love it the way someone cares about you... dude you must continue writing this

Posted by CaptUSMC

Excellent! Please continue with many more chapters. Your writing draws the reader in wanting more. Do not stop now. You have the style of writing the reader wants to visualize and feel all the different emotions. Well Done!

Posted by David Bula

Thanks you guys are the best and chapter 4 should be available for you to read soon

Posted by billy

Bula! Standing ovation, we're screaming and throwing flowers. Strong, straightfromtheheart writing. Publish on paper, mistooks and all, exactly as is. My eyes are wet, so are my jeans. Bravo! Encore!

Posted by Cash

Omg I love dis story Mark just takes my heart away keep doin wat you doin my dude I'll love 2 read more of yur stuff

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