Posted by Patrick Beautiful ending. I can not wait for another story.
Posted by eric Loved it!! You should write vampire fiction please, your so talented!
Posted by Adrian OMG love the ending!! You are very talented and please do keep writing great stories like this. This is absolutely my favorite. My name is Adrian and I'm joining the Marines after I graduate.. I hope I find my Mark while I'm in there lol. Take care!
Posted by Ian That was so Beautiful! Thank you for writing such an amazing story!
Posted by Sean Anderson The best story iv read in so long so happy Mark and Adrian got back together. Would love to know what happens next but u did say the end but any way thank you so much for such a great read i love love loved it :D
Posted by Denys Thanks for this great series...keep writing, mate!!!
Posted by Hilbert I love all of your story! I kinda surprise that david will pick andrew as his boyfriend,and adrian will come back with mark. This story is so touching. Keep up a great stories! :D
Posted by Nehemiah dude u r my fucking hero, the way u concluded two stories at once was great. ur stories have inspired me, keep the stories coming
Posted by Cash Love dis story and all the others u have inspired me 2 look 4 my mark love a happy ending
Posted by Taurus Great story David but i just wish it didn't end like that with Cory. He's a nice guy and he was gud 2 adrian, he had nothing but love 4 him, He didn't deserve that. I love Mark with so much passion but he's no angel, i just wanna wipe that smile he had on his face when he came in the door with a fist. i just hope Cory and George find love and move on with their lives lol. Anyway, i'm Luking 4ward 2 more of ur stories. Love u Dave XOXOXO
Posted by tht1guy I agree lol + cory's sex was better anyways!
Posted by Kay Cee Thanks for writing such a great story..
#We still wont mind if you continued with it..
Posted by luis i loved it i had been waiting for this a lot of time, and i love thinking of who the characters may be...and i always relate mark with spencer reed
Posted by JJ loved ur series i cried during all of them ,continue writing David
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omg..i just can't control myself..i've never read such a great story full of sex n emotions , romance. real life experience..everything..each n evry material were there...I just love this..n really happy ending!!!
n I must say u really hv a great writing capability dealing with feelings..thank you sooooooooo muchhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
god bless you
Posted by jc palma i had many question part 2 part 2 part 2 please
Posted by orion quite an amazing story , and beautifull
Posted by orion quite an amazing story , and beautifull
Posted by Dami Best story I have read in the longest time ever! Most emotion, love, and sex! And it made me cry at the end of every chapter!
Posted by Elliot I don't even have the wrods to describe how much I loved this Sierries it's just so awsome I would marry it if I could please write for hundreds of years for us and plz finish sierres football love for me
Posted by vince Best story ive read on this site. Its a real story that actually has filling not just a quickie.
Posted by Your Lover! Wow, this is one of the most unexpected and surprising story I have ever read.
And I feel so so sorry for George and Corey. May be they found each other? :) Please do keep writing. This was insanely good!
Thanks.
Posted by Klyde Just finished reading the whole story. While reading the first parts of the ending, I was heart broken knowing that Mark and Adrian wont be together ( I freaking CRIED!! ) But as i continue reading it my hopes got higher and higher until Marks birthday party. In that moment I was freaking out more and more as i read the rest. I had a very huge smile on m y face when Mark was on the door when Adrian was packing. It was a breath taking ending :) Your such a great writer. Keep Up the good Work. I mean Great Work ^_^
Posted by J.H. All I can say is that my life is complete. I imagined such a great story and ended with a desire to find my Marine!
Thank you, from the bottom of my heart.
I look forward to whatever story you finish soon :)
Posted by Nicholas Wow...I'm really moved by this story...I know its a fiction but it seems so real. Too bad Cory acted the way he did...I really wanted Adrian and Cory to work out but I also wanted Adrian and Mark to work out...as long as George and Cory does not work out. Maybe write another chapter? Where can we talk to you? Where does your inspiration come from? You're really talented!!!
Posted by Giffy Oh my gosh thats the best story ever,the wait was worth it...i thought mark wouldnt be 'the one'but u really know how to twist it up,u are the best
Posted by Ralph David, plsssssssss. Make a continuation of this, their marriage, their married life, if they adopted a son or daughter. Plsssssssssss!!!!!! I want more for mark and Adrian. Continue football love too. Tnx!!!!!!! YOU'RE DEFINITELY THE BEST AUTHOR. BETTER THAN J.K. ROWLING and STEPHENIE MEYER!!!!!!! REALLLYYYY!!!!!!!